Author Topic: Ideas of strikeouts... moviedirector
posted 01-16-2001 10:12 PM
Okay, I am writing a script for a movie---I don't want to give away details until it is finished---but I need some VERY Funny ways that a clueless New Yorker middle aged guy could strike out with women (please nothing innapropriate ) But I seriously need some good ideas it's like a romantic comedy movie, and I need some ideas. And he doesn't strike out because he is a jerk, more like he is clueless. He has no idea what to do etc. I have a few ideas, but need MANY more.

Thanks,
Mark

dogcow
posted 01-17-2001 09:15 PM
bad pickup lines

ex "do you work for FedEX because I thought you were checkin' out my package"

stuff like that, you've heard em before im sure and theres probably lists online.

-nick

SAFilms
posted 01-22-2001 04:48 PM
don't do the cheesy line stuff, that's the easy way out. do the embarrassing, can't think right kinda stuff.

i have a good idea. he's talking to her after buying a hot dog from a vendor, he puts his wallet in his pocket, and continues talking. then she wants a hot dog and he realizes someone just stole his wallet. now, he runs after tha guy, and she's gone when he gets back.

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