Author Topic: Feed back on short script Cold_as_ICE
posted 01-25-2001 01:59 PM
I uploaded a short script to my i-drive account premierepro. Please read it and give me some feed back. Thanks.
ICE

DigiteyeZ
posted 01-25-2001 05:19 PM
yeah, i've actually read this joke before, which you expanded on a bit. it's kinda funny while reading it, but i don't know if it would come off as funny on video...

Cold_as_ICE
posted 01-26-2001 02:38 PM
Thanks DigiteyeZ-
yeah It's a short little story I found laying around at work I don't know who the original author is.
That's kind of what I'm worried about. How well will it convey the comedy on film? Anyone else?

ICE

[This message has been edited by Cold_as_ICE (edited 01-26-2001).]

Cold_as_ICE
posted 01-31-2001 04:14 PM
Bump once. Anyone else, please.

Ice

Bread_12
posted 01-31-2001 04:26 PM
It was good, but it could use some changes. Nothing serious, just some things that would help the story out. I mean, watching the guy repeatedly calling jack a jerk is just going to become annoying ya know.

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