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Author
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Topic: Fantasy Prophecy
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TrollHunter
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posted 03-05-2001 07:40 PM
Hey, guys,
I've got a new storyline with an easier-to-follow plot, but am still having some of the same old problems. Perhaps I am a bit too critical on myself, but the story doesn't seem to be taking the right shape. I've got a nice little slaughter at the beginning, a prophecy is set, as is a mission, and the story gets a bit jumbled from there on.
Here's what I've got please tell me what you think...nevermind... it was here, but now is gone. I have it posted on my very own web page now at MSN.
http://communities.msn.com/IdeasRPGsScreenplays
[This message has been edited by TrollHunter (edited 03-06-2001).] |
multimedia light & magic
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posted 03-05-2001 11:25 PM
you posted the entire script! 
dude, you should edit your msg, and post this on a webpage. it eats up LAS's resources like crazy.
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TrollHunter
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posted 03-06-2001 09:55 AM
Oops...  sorry bout that...
It's only what I have so far.
If you could let me know how to put it on a web site, I'd be very interested.
Thanks and sorry |
multimedia light & magic
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posted 03-06-2001 10:17 AM
hey man, its ok.ask for help, get ppl to read it, and send it through email. |
Felix
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posted 03-07-2001 01:21 AM
Does posting links to web pages eat up LAS space? Hell, I didn't know that.------------------
I once had 509 posts...but now I don't. |
Tn
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posted 03-07-2001 02:45 AM
Felix, TrollHunter copied and pasted his script into the message, that's what ml&m was refering to.I can't get the doc file off of the link you posted [This message has been edited by Tn (edited 03-07-2001).] |
TrollHunter
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posted 03-13-2001 05:32 PM
How long did you wait for it to D/L?
It took me quite a while and I have it saved on my hard drive!
Don't worry... just try it again and allow it more time.
Sorry about the slowness to respond... my computer didn't let me online for a while.TrollHunter |
Tn
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posted 03-13-2001 06:01 PM
I keep getting a 404 file not found error, but it might be because MS doesn't want me to use Nutscrape. I'll try Internet Crapxplorer. Now it won't let me login, d'oh! Oh, well, sorry I can't read it, but good luck with it.  |
TrollHunter
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posted 03-13-2001 07:06 PM
I'll just email it to you. |
