Opening scene from CROSSING LINES

Opening scene from CROSSING LINES


 





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DackL
 posted 01-06-2001 06:13 PM           
Ok, check it out and please give me some good constructive critcism (I also accept compliments too ):

[EDIT] Get it at my www.Driveway.com account

login: caliberfilms
password:llama

DivX | 6.8Mb | Runtime: 1:50
[/EDIT]

ISSUES:
Audio: There seems to be a slight fuzz in the background, I'm not entirely sure why, hopefully it wont detract to much from the clip.

Tripod: or actually the lack thereof. I'm aware that it would be better with the use of a tripod. And finally the

Font: at the very end, I dont like very much at all. I plan on changing it.

Thanks!!!

[This message has been edited by DackL (edited 01-09-2001).]

multimedia light & magic
 posted 01-06-2001 06:52 PM           
i can't d/l it dude.

DackL
 posted 01-06-2001 07:07 PM           
hmm, your right. Dangit. Ok now I have to figure out whats wrong.

DackL
 posted 01-06-2001 07:15 PM           
the upload to webjump must have corrupted the file somehow. At any rate, its accessible at my driveway account and it works:

Login: caliberfilms
password: llama

the file is opening.avi while you are there, you can also check out another thing I did otherhalfsmall.zip, its a fake trailer.

admiral
 posted 01-06-2001 07:47 PM           
Great scene, very moody. The lack of a tripod isn't much of a problem most of hte time, but annoying in a few key shots. I love how your image goes to video "snow". Great choice of locations too.

The one thing I don't like is how you show the killer take out his gun twice. This works sometimes but not here.

DackL
 posted 01-09-2001 12:16 AM           
Thanks for the comments Admiral, I've changed that repeatgun scene. Anyone else? I really would like to hear as much feedback as I can. I'm working hard to make this next project really good and the opening scene is crucial.

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